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oh my god guys... I haven't been very productive at all for the last 6 years or so, nothing to link anyway. But i was so glad to stumble back on this thread. There were a ton of great critiques and pointers in here, and I was so stupid and belligerent as a kid.. I wish I had the aptitude to stay pro...

^^ive never said that in my life.

edit: well oh fuck

its cool i dont take any offence i just hope you understand i dont mean any either. :) oh and "Nice work, son. Here`s 5 bucks, buy yourself something at the mall. *gives the kid 1 cent*" thats really funny :) but i couldnt do like a second strip because none of them are supposed to have a common thr...

ive been constantly trying to improve it, and havnt tried to be hostile toward the feedback. you have to understand that i can only do so much abotu feedback. i don't know any other way of writing comics, its hard to reply when someone plainly says "make it funnier", thats a tough bill. logically, i...

situational comedy.

well in the two you refferenced, what you identify as the joke isn't meant to be the joke. on the plane ticket one, the joke is that someone usually is set on where thier going and knows thier whole plan when buying a ticket, he was so anxious to go anywhere thougj. and yeah i do see what you mean a...

thank you so much for your kind words! i appreciate you spreading it around so much.

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new strip
http://www.thefriendsociety.com/everyon ... trip_id=13


how is this one? any crits would be appreciated.

edit/ yeahduff.

http://www.thefriendsociety.com/everyonecheers/
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new one. i'd love to hear what you think


edit/yeahduff/ image far too large for the forum.

naw man than i guess its not a gag strip. some of the humor is supposed to be in the (is the kid lying on purpose he dosent seem to be). its a simple joke, with a punchline sorta. i mean i dont see the confusion. i 'm doing one right now that i think will be a real solid and widely accepted and like...

well he told his dad he made the plane for him in class, but when he gave it to him, its obvious to the father that it was bought at the mall, and not handmade. the dumb kid even left the tag from the mall on it! its supposed to be funny because thats an awkward/unusual sitation and the last frame i...

theres a wrong variable where it counts the first comic as #0, even though there is no number 0.

therefor i dont know wtf youre talking about.

maybe you cloud link to the individual strips ? i appreciate this and i will explain the joke and premise of the strip and you can tell me how to improve.

theyre all common sence stuff

yea youre probably tired

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updATE

edit/yeahduff/ image size too big.

i was just curious if there are other comic making message boards and communitys on the internet, that anyone knows about?

any specific good ones ??

links would be appreciated )) thanks !!

yeahduff wrote:Dude....

?? :(

but wait untill you see these new ones im working on !!!

http://www.thefriendsociety.com/everyon ... trip_id=10

http://www.thefriendsociety.com/everyon ... strip_id=9

two new comics !!! )))) feedback is appreacciiattedd

come on i have a process that goes through pencil and then scanned and then flash and painst shop pro and thebn photoshop D: i try to pay as close attention to dsetail as possible and eventhough i have a routine system worked out for it, i average like 4 or 5, more hours doing it, and countless hour...

ive been getting that once about once on every fourm im on, but its usually the guy that brushes my stuff off and dosent look at it much. i dunno i read a bunch and i think theyre great i just think the story format is similar. :\

any ideas on how i can get my particular comic bigger???

thanks for checking it out guys :)))) i dont really know what to say i just bought a fat sack of weed tonight 8) 8) 8) 8) thanks for noticing, its supposed to be not a regular strip with continuing characters and all i mean, its supposed to be new each time, thanks. i dunno im trying to stay to a st...