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A couple years ago, I pitched this comic here for critique, and it was very rough. Many people were very helpful and informative. I'd really like to get a few comments, critiques and such, on it now, a couple years hence. (I apologize if double posting is against the rules, I couldn't find a rule st...

This is pretty good. Excellent art, and a good story as well, though it seems there was alot of past stuff, past character meetings and such that havent yet been expanded on.

Looking for some good critique for my comic Nukeland Cinema It's been a few years since I posted here last, back when I still had a poorly designed angelfire page and the name "Fuxx0r3d Nukeland Cinema" I've since dropped angelfire, dropped the 1337 (though it sometimes pops up in dialogue, but not ...

well, I know Im in. This could be a LOT of fun

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Nuff said.

Wow, the art is fantastic though.

Well, these are things I have to work on. Im gonna do some shots in the woods for a change of scenery. I bet you didnt know the woods had multiple equal sources of light perfect for photography. Well.... IT DOES NOW! In other news, a large section of forest has burned down today. Experts say it was ...

I actually am not capable of any sort of drawing. http://www.angelfire.com/comics/nukeland/webcam2.jpg Is the result of 3 hours in MSPaint. And yeah, I actually DID bring in the hero character in that particular invasion as a Deus Ex Machina (im familliar with them term, and purposely used it, thoug...

Pepsi is my favourite brand of POP!

When thirsty, I reach for a can of POP (Or a bottle of rum...)

Ah, understandable, understandable. Well, Im the forgiving sort, especially since Im so happy about all the criticism I have received here in such a short time. Its great. I now have ALOT to work with in improving my comic. You guys are the best. I appreciate this alot more than, say you guys kissin...

Lol, l33t comes almost second nature to me, lol. I started using it as a way to annoy my friends, rofl. And sometimes I type nothing BUT leet in chat. But I'll try and not use/overuse it here, as I dont want to make anyone uncomfortable.

It's great to learn!
Because KNOWLEDGE IS t3h p0w3rzz0r!

Well, im not changing my comic name. Other than that, criticize away.

But then, all of a sudden, hundreds of NINJA swarmed the CIA headquarters and began to fight with the agents.

ah, ok. I see how I worded that. Well, its a moot point now anyways, but thanks for pointing that out for me. I still stand by the fact that I NEVER stated anything like "my comic rocks" or "My comic r0xx0rs" in ANY of my posts, yet a ton of you seem to have seen that written by me and are criticixi...

Oh, and I've changed the name of this thread, as it seemed to bug some people.

Wow, this thread is popular.

TheGoobla, that site is AWESOME!

I will strive to improve my comic, to a point that DM even likes it!

McDuffies, thank you for taking the time to give me those comments. I will work on many of those things, especially the camera angles, and the plot. I really wanted it to be, in essence, toys in the City of Nukeland (A.k.a my bedroom, basement, and so on) but the toys have many of the capabilities o...

The old pc game Quake. Btw, I left my ego out of this. ANd as for the paint effects, they will get better with practice and with software. I cant draw, which is why I picked a toy-based comic. And alot of what darkmagic said WAS pointless flame. "Your comic sucks." without backing it is what bugged ...

Phalanx. Thank you for taking the time to make such an insightful post. Many of the things you mentioned are things that I am working on. Especially the whole camera angles and colors/effects thing. The issues before issue 42 all seemed to be a bit darker and dimmer too due to insufficient lighting....